Quiet Poetry Lounge : Beautiful

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ghost_writer, Apr 8, 2006.

  1. ghost_writer

    ghost_writer Member MEMBER

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    she looks in the mirror and wipes the tears from her eyes
    she thinks that her thighs are too fat
    and that her hips are too wide
    she tries to hide behind the make up that now
    makes up her face
    and she cant look away from the mirror
    she's too concerned w/ her weight
    she
    debates whether her nose is
    to flat or too wide
    and she knows she want breast implants
    she just cant decide the size
    besides that she also wants contacts
    to change the color of her eyes
    and when i
    tell her how good she already looks
    she thinks my compliments are lies
    why...

    why a life full of diets
    and a medicine full of pills
    and why and i just hoping she isn't
    throwin up her meals
    but still she feels she needs to be
    one of those females in the magazines
    so she starves herself...
    yet i estimated her weight to only be a buck 15
    between a low self-esteem
    and her desire to be a queen
    she sceams for her dreams like a crack head
    and gets the same results as a fein
    and still...
    she has to be the most beautiful females i've ever seen
    and i wanna to show her...
    i want her to see what i see when she looks in the mirror
    i wanna to hear her thoughts and call them lies as i
    wisper sweet nothings in her ear
    i wanna
    dry hear eyes and wipe the tears that smeared her make-up
    i wanna say what every other guy who walks by her in the streets think
    she beautiful...
    so i wrote her a poem
    and like her
    it was perfect
    but my words went unheard when i spit it
    i did it for her and she didnt even get it
    eyes blinded by lies and i realize she was addicted
    but still...
    i wanted her to leave with me
    but she didnt believe me
    when i said she was beautiful...


    (i'm new around here... hope u like it) :coffee:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic place of expression
    welcome to the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    very nice flow tyte scribe that speaks out
    indeed she's beauty within ..................
     
  3. black_soul

    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot drop poet you'll fit right in around here can't wait to read more.
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    luv how you put it down with this i think many ladies can relate to this.:welldone:
     
  5. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    nice write...excellent sentiments and support to the sistas....regardless of what size...
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte drop, our society is encouraging this type of mindset among our beautiful people. we need more speak out the way you just did.
     
  7. Timmytim04

    Timmytim04 Member MEMBER

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    that was a tight flow man...keep posting
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow on with the truth poet;)
     
  9. CREOLEQUEEN

    CREOLEQUEEN Active Member MEMBER

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    Welcome! I've been in that place before.... thank God, i am not there no more. I felt that, keep the pen on da pad!
     
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