Quiet Poetry Lounge : Beautiful

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by VirtuousDove, Oct 4, 2001.

  1. VirtuousDove

    VirtuousDove Active Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful

    I didn't know your name
    I could not see your face
    but I felt your existence inside of me
    and it was beautiful

    not knowing what to expect
    as I prophesized your emotional and physical success
    with each touch from you to me
    bringing us closer to our interdependency
    it was beautiful

    we worked to give you life
    your determination and my strength, had to suffice
    as you entered into this world
    you were embraced in my arms of love
    and you were beautiful

    an overcomer, Ajani, the name suites you well
    you were a blessing then, and the perfect gift
    and today that truth remains the same
    as your essence warms the lives of those who love you
    you shall forever be
    one of the dearest gifts God has presented to me
    and Beautiful You Are

    ----Love----
     
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    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    That was beautiful....
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a Beautiful read. Thank you for writing this poem!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    breathtaking....

    simply breathtaking...

    thank you!

    a
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as I exhale

    truly Beautiful !
    the word can't be said enough to discribe this !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love da flava of this one here beautiful
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    What an exquisite validation!

    This reminded me of Stevie's "Isn't She Lovely."
     
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    The birth of a child, the most beautiful gift God bestows on a woman.

    There is no emotion that can duplicate it....I remember.

    very nice, poet.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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