Black Poetry : Beautiful

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by VirtuousDove, Oct 4, 2001.

  1. VirtuousDove

    VirtuousDove Active Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful

    I didn't know your name
    I could not see your face
    but I felt your existence inside of me
    and it was beautiful

    not knowing what to expect
    as I prophesized your emotional and physical success
    with each touch from you to me
    bringing us closer to our interdependency
    it was beautiful

    we worked together to give you life
    your determination and my strength, had to suffice
    as you entered into this world
    you were embraced in my arms of love
    and you were beautiful

    an overcomer, Ajani, the name suites you well
    you were a blessing then, and the perfect gift
    and today that truth remains the same
    as your essence warms the lives of those who love you
    you shall forever be
    one of the greatest gifts God has presented to me
    and Beautiful You Are

    ------Love------


    :toast: :star:
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Hello VirtuousDove :)

    Thank you for joining us and sharing such a beautiful flow.
    You are now a part of our Family and we're looking forward to more!

    So please ... make yourself at home.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Virtuous Dove,

    Your poetic skillz are certainly virtuous. I love this poem. Looking forward to reading more from you.




    *in appreciation of motherhood*


    Welcome:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME!!!!

    TO da poetic flow of Destee's playground
    the open love flow best intown
    as yo vibe is sweet we be dancing to yo
    beat so sho us mo!! welcome to our family
    :D :toast: :D :heart:
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Hello VirtuousDove, Welcome to the family.
    Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it.

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  6. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was beautiful...hoping to
    read more from you.
     
  7. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    agreeing with sherykah...

    there is nothing like a mother's love to make a child feel complete...a child can never get that from a father, the way s/he can from a mother. THAT'S NOT TO PUT FATHERS DOWN...but nine months of preparation makes for a very distinct, very strong bond.

    BEAUTIFUL FLOW.:)
     
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