Black Poetry : beautiful

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by guttapoetfromny, Nov 25, 2004.

  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your eyes are like diamonds
    they sparkle like water on a sunny day,
    your hands soft as pillows
    used for comfort,
    skin
    smooth as silk,
    complexion
    yellow like the sun,
    beauty be your name,

    rare as black diamonds,
    beautiful like black pearls,
    nubian like africa,
    beauty be your name,

    fresh like blooming spring flowers,
    warm like hot cocoa on a winter day,
    mellow like jazz music,
    all i want is to grow up to be a woman just like my momma,
    beauty be her name!


    dedicated to: my mom
    RIP
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi and welcome to the hot spot,
    We treasure those the most...that treasures moms, very nice piece...thanks for sharing and keep dropping.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet wow......i love it
    welcome to the house of peace & harmony
    flow on !
    enjoy ya self
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    nice to hear someone wants to be like their moms...
    nice lovely write...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so endearing poet, what a sweet way to honor your mom.
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just like mom that is a sweet sentement towards a true lady. :teach:
    Nice to have your love shared on the form poet and Welcome 2 the family!
     
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    beautifull sweetnes is sparkling from the screen..












    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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