Black Poetry : **~Beautiful~**

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **inspired by Tweet's "Beautiful"

    My eyes have never seen someone so beautiful
    So much charm, so much class, you're the first thought of each
    day...


    Hmmmmmm
    the first thought of my every waking moment
    and I feel you deeply even when your not there.
    My eyes glaze with awe at the liquid beauty of someone like you.
    You strike me and I'm weakened.
    No cure for this disease.
    I don't want to be restored, I'd rather continue
    feeling this sweet infirmity.


    You move through me, such a natural feeling
    and Oh, please don't take it away...
    I can get caught up when I see you, you're so Beautiful...


    It echoes throughout my mind
    and I can't seem to make head or tails of the
    entire situation.
    There is no clarity and for a moment I'm
    lost in the tossing of your sea.
    See,
    You move through me like a river,
    leaving a discharge of fertile soil that makes my barren
    desert grow. I'm soon full of love and life and each time
    I see you and breathe you I can get so caught up in you
    and I loose me inside of you simply because you are
    Beautiful.


    I have received a love, thats all divine; so innocent and
    so pure
    You make each moment stand still. You took care of my heart
    ever so gently,
    I can never repay you (no) Your desires I'm here to fulfill...


    Its all you I keep experiencing.
    From your bottomless chest I have been given a love
    so dreamy and free, that it defies the carnal
    and is something infused with divinity.
    This love that you've breathed into me fills each of
    my bodies cavities with a innocence and God-like purity.
    Your loving me makes each period of time an arrested moment.
    Time stands still and we continue moving toward eternity.
    My heart is entrusted to you gently and I could
    think of no one better suited to take me from ecstasy to ecstasy,
    I don't think I could ever find anything to repay you with,
    and it seems futile to even try, but rest assured that
    I'm here to drink and fulfill each of your burning desires.
    My desire is to be burned eternally by your liquid fires.


    You, You are, You, You're more than a dream come true. Beautiful, Beautiful...

    I can get caught up when I see you...You're so Beautiful....



    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne" Publishing
    ~*Capucine ​
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another beautiful poem, very nice drops
    keep them coming..............
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I particularly liked these lines:

    "You move through me like a river,
    leaving a discharge of fertile soil that makes my barren
    desert grow. I'm soon full of love and life and each time
    I see you and breathe you I can get so caught up in you
    and I loose me inside of you simply because you are
    Beautiful."

    Left me speechless, just looking for words to describe the beauty in this, wow.
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spin: Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful. The intimacy of love well expressed.
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW!!!

    So many beautiful lines in this piece I'm in awe.....wow
    This poem is truly a gr8 work..you put itdown once again....wow
     
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    very very nice flow roll on
     
  7. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your love is well recieved poet.
     
  8. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ma, thank you so much for the beauty you possess. I don't know what I would do without your encougragement.
     
  9. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce, honey you are simply a dear.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  10. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwww thank you so much Nita. Much love to you.