Black Poetry : beautiful

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by klabarron, Mar 2, 2004.

  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i could take away the pain of the past i would.
    i would hurt everyone who has hurt you.
    i would turn the way of everyone who has turned away from you.
    i would restore all that was lost to you 100 fold.
    if i could...

    but when i think, deeply, within my soul... i would not
    for hurt is what has strengthened you and built character
    the abandonment has taught you how to love in tough times
    and loss has brought a deep sense of value to each soul you encounter.

    i am amazed that life so ugly, has birthed you. beauty.
    with scars and wounds and a beleaguered soul. beauty
    with your vulnerabilities and insecurities. beauty.
    with your failures, disappointments, and pain....
    beautiful you are.
     
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    tight piece brah...
    keep voice'n da beauty...
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice likes this scribe
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks khasm/mzblak!!! peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let the sweet beauty shine in
    dis drop was awesome tyte
     
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    This just blew me away, the title certainly is appropriate.
     
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    very deep flow poet
    much love
    feeling this drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  8. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks blue. much love
     
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    Oh my, Brother Klabarron
    this was so "Beautiful"...
    and so profound...
    I swam soooo deeply
    in your words...I nearly
    became lost...but your
    gift brought me to the light &
    back to the surface...

    Encore...Encore...Encore :spinstar:
     
  10. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh sista. Thanks so ooo ooo ooo much!
     
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