Black Poetry : Beautiful

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  1. mfchild

    mfchild New Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful

    take my voice
    and imprint upon your mind
    a vision of the way
    that i would touch you
    borrow my soul
    for just a moment
    and combine with it
    your spirit
    long enough to understand
    that i am no ordinary man.
    I would want every encounter
    we would ever have
    to last for ever
    would you be the first
    to break up my fantasy

    how beautiful
    does one have to be
    to have a love as strong as yours
    how secure must one become
    to attempt the perfect approach
    without pause

    on my knees
    and i can't recite the rosary
    nor can i believe?
    that my mind has erased
    the memory of my history
    it has replaced it
    with the question of you
    must you hear me tell you?
    I wonder your conscience within
    by the way today I've converted
    because you have become
    my new religion

    how beautiful
    does one have to be
    to have a love as strong as yours
    how secure must one become
    to attempt the perfect approach
    without pause

    lyrics by: Paris Mark Toon 4 ButterScotch Blue publishing © www.butterscotchblue.com www.mothersfavoritechild.com
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful..the title fits....
    a wonderful write indeed......
    :welcome to destee.com
    enjoy your stay....Peace Angel
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet scribing a lovely drop flow on
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is by far the most enjoyable piece I've read today...
    Your style and form...is quite captivating
    and the way you articulate the beauty of
    selfless love...plays wonderfully upon the
    heart, mind & soul.

    Masterful piece!
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "take my voice
    and imprint upon your mind
    a vision of the way
    that i would touch you"

    borrow my soul
    for just a moment
    and combine with it
    your spirit
    long enough to understand
    that i am no ordinary man."

    images&senses... whoa!

    this premeates souldeep!

    a beautifully romantic peace...
    definitely deserves more attention


    Coco :heart:
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was nicely laid.

    Liked it a lot.

    Keep bringing 'em.
     
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