Black Poetry : beautiful

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  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what's beautiful? i've heard it said it's more than skin deep
    but that can't be true; cause when you look at me
    my personality ain't what you tryin to see; its my thighs my lips
    my waist my hips;my body it curves it rises and dips
    what's beautiful? i had a man tell me it was my mind
    but do you think that turned me on when it was might time
    when i wanted him to make love to me
    and he turned off all the lights to avoid what he would see?
    when i heard that beautiful was deep in my eyes so blue
    it wasn't afrocentric beauty that appealed to you.
    it was my european hand me down; my hair silky straight
    and you was ready to go when i put my hair in braids
    what's beautiful to me? i could say it's your body so tight
    i could say it's that thing that lays it down so right
    but in truth it's your voice;your touch; your hands
    your beauty isn't beauty; it's just you being a man
    what's beautiful? nine little letters that can affect a whole lifetime
    makes you cut open your body;**** near lose your mind
    turn this way and that to impress somebody else
    layers of makeup so deep you havent even seen yourself
    it's like a plateau that some of us don't know we've reached
    it's the essence of science; in order to believe we must see
    what is beautiful? it depends on who you ask
    looks or attitude; money or class
    and in 24 years you know what i just realized?
    the only beautiful that exists is in being alive.
    there is no beauty;there's no ugly; there is only what GOD made
    so love every inch, every blemish- HE doesn't make mistakes.
    --peace. Ms.Dy
    (copywrite 05/03 alw)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dynasty...that was really beautifull....oh uh i mean lol ...That was a great scribe. Welcome to D's !!!!!!!!!!!! :toast:
     
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    welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground of love
    welcome to da family wit dis flow
    welcome come bless us some mo!

    nice scribe :) :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    what is beautiful? it depends on who you ask
    the only beautiful that exists is in being alive

    in the eye of the beholder your life is in full view finding all that resides inside a beauty that is true....welcome to the fam...this is home:wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    this was a tyte and profound write!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    LOVELY

    Dynasty, you enthrall me with such poetry!

    :eek: :heart: :kiss:
     
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    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sistah let da truth be told!
    fa sho!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    Told ya I was going to look for more of you. and lone behold it was off the hook just like I predicted. Beautiful!
     
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    "layers of makeup so deep you havent even seen yourself "
    THANK UUUUUUUUU my sista its about time somebody spoke on that :) LOL natural is RARE
    and if ya complexion come in a bottle...ummm...thas not natural LOL I was feelin this, makes me proud to be me...thanx to u :)
     
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