Quiet Poetry Lounge : Beautiful You...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by info-moetry, Dec 22, 2004.

  1. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    Every King needs a Queen like you
    or else his king-dome is worthless
    I'll be the Sun, you be the Moon
    let's peak thru the clouds and watch the Earth twist
    close your eyes as we walk thru the heavens hand in hand
    as my 19 rays light the way
    since the Earth travels at 1, 037 1/3 miles per hour
    we can make love at least twice a day
    which will in turn cause
    the people on earth to have brighter days
    as we travel past certain planets, like Mars
    I'll show you others with black faces on it
    but we have to tippy toe over the rings around saturn
    be careful each one has magnetic lasers on it
    your essence is so attractive that though the earth is 3/4 water
    you keep the bodies of water from overflowing
    and when I'm feeling myself too much
    you even keep me from overglowing
    I'll carry u over the big dipper
    don't wanna see you get your feet wet
    I'll introduce you to the 12 dimensions of the Zodiac
    since they came into existance I haven't been to sleep yet
    other Suns in the U-n-I verse were too far to grab your hand
    so I waited 93 million miles away until I could get closer to you
    before I even approachesd you to tell you how I felt
    I shifted the Earth's orbit just so I could get closer to you
    now that we're here together
    I won't rise or set without you
    at night I see the way they look up in amazement
    cause it's just something about you
    I hate the time of year when you can only give half
    or sometimes only a quarter of you
    this is when I meditate and praise our creator
    for making such a beautiful daughter of you
    baby, please don't take it personal
    anytime I totally eclipse you
    just know it's because everytime that I blink my eyes
    I want you to know I totally missed you
    for a nickname you call me Ra
    as I bow down and praise you like Isis
    while trying 2 reverse the explosion causing u 2 break away form the earth
    66 trillion years ago that left you lifeless
    but don't worry about it my goddess
    nothing can harm you while I'm protecting
    cause when I shine you shine
    so when I rest at night you'll be my reflection........

    :kiss2:
     
  2. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kudos

    :cool: :terrific: :bowdown: Beautiful piece.
     
  3. angelicsage

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    WOW!

    Absolutely mesmerizing! :sand:
     
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    There's a moon out tonight, imaginative and romantic!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love this flow here whewwww tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    This is beautiful. I dont even know what to say...Im speechless
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know poet, all of your pieces just take us to another place, and this one, the one I waited to read....wow...This was so beautiful all I could do was sigh, and simply marvel at your words.
     
  8. PurpleMoons

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    whew hew! :terrific:

    Not only did you drop a beautiful piece you kicked some science and spirituality all up in here!

    Loved it! Keep on bringing it!
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verry lightfull....




    beautifull....









    more of youre work

    we are looking forward to..









    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  10. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amazing! i really liked the detail, how you went into every aspect.

    keep the flow goin.
     
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