Black Poetry : Beautiful Writer (Nemerful Katubat)

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  1. blackwizdom

    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those dreamy eyes conceal
    The ancient voices of centuries past-
    Behold his deep mysterious look
    From the very dawn of earth's creation,
    His hands the foundations shook.
    With pen held firmly in hand,
    Miraculous works he wrought
    For there isn't any possession
    Or monies in the world
    Wherewith his precious gift can be bought.
    Such joy and happiness it brings
    Whenever this majestic creature begins to write,
    Transforming darkness into obscure day
    And day into translucent night.
    From his head shines forth undaunted wisdom
    And the beauty of his heart is made manifest.
    And his voice will continue to speak
    For generations to come,
    Even after he has entered his long-awaited rest.
     
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    nice flow...tight poem........much love :)
     
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    Words spoken from above this is really nice. Your verses is as your name blackwizdom words of a prophet, this is excellent continue.
     
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    thanx for da love
     
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    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx cindy
     
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    that just how I feel about yall. LOVED IT.
     
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    tight work ....poetic prophecy
     
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    This flowed so gracefully, the language expressive, and this was simply a beautiful piece.
     
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    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx my Beautiful Black Sista
     
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