Black Poetry : Beautiful Ugly

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Oct 13, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The irony of it all in such beautiful prose!
     
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    beyond the mendal
    of the torn heart she
    was beautiful at soul
    from the tiny tears
    left a reflection pool
    of beauty and love
    for in the arm u held
    a queen the tame tyme
    pose will river her a sweet
    rose

    this was so wonderful and i really love this sista
    made my heart reach out in support of a beauty
    thank u for this
     
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    this was very warm like the way it flowed sis
    tight write with power behind it
    thanks for sharing this one.....Angel
     
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    this was short sister and packed full of emotive reality.
    The next line was more powerful then the one before and I find my eyes filled
    with empathy and emotion for this sister who my heart has come to know
    all too well.
    Thank you soul sista your voice is always a distinct passionate calling for all to hear
    and i adore you for it :grouphug: :heart: :grouphug:
     
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    angelisage-Pity how often we fool ourselves and see the worst within instead of the best. Very nicely done, HH
     
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    Oh, sister, this really touches my heart. Beautiful and elegant and so on the real. Bless you and much love.
     
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    this was one of your shorter pieces. It may have been shorter but it still had that same impact as the others:)
    nice work sage:heart:
     
  9. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As always you take me higher and higher with each passing time that I read your magnificent work! You are too talented for words Sage and you know I'm still wanting to do that collab with you.
     
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    Very beautiful piece, powerful and compassionate all in one that takes talent and you have it. Lovely piece, keep flowin!
     
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