Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Oct 13, 2004.
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The irony of it all in such beautiful prose!
beyond the mendal
of the torn heart she
was beautiful at soul
from the tiny tears
left a reflection pool
of beauty and love
for in the arm u held
a queen the tame tyme
pose will river her a sweet
this was so wonderful and i really love this sista
made my heart reach out in support of a beauty
thank u for this
this was very warm like the way it flowed sis
tight write with power behind it
thanks for sharing this one.....Angel
this was short sister and packed full of emotive reality.
The next line was more powerful then the one before and I find my eyes filled
with empathy and emotion for this sister who my heart has come to know
all too well.
Thank you soul sista your voice is always a distinct passionate calling for all to hear
and i adore you for it
angelisage-Pity how often we fool ourselves and see the worst within instead of the best. Very nicely done, HH
Oh, sister, this really touches my heart. Beautiful and elegant and so on the real. Bless you and much love.
this was one of your shorter pieces. It may have been shorter but it still had that same impact as the others
nice work sage
As always you take me higher and higher with each passing time that I read your magnificent work! You are too talented for words Sage and you know I'm still wanting to do that collab with you.
Very beautiful piece, powerful and compassionate all in one that takes talent and you have it. Lovely piece, keep flowin!
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