Black Poetry : Beautiful (Ugly Pt.2)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    drinkin orange juice
    out of a old coke bottle
    beauti sat...
    letting her fingers control
    where the galaxies expanded to...
    (Back to God's Hand, where they came from in the first place)

    She would see many things,
    prisy girls in fly dresses and Gucci glasses
    couldn't break her stride...
    shoot...wisdom would leak from her pores
    almost unconsciously...
    and some would revel at her appearence...

    She would blow kisses to self-centered
    ******* and ask God to have murcy on there souls...
    cuz they were jealous...
    (but i wasn't her fault she was beautiful :grin: )

    she was brighter than they were though....
    to bad their souls would cringe
    at ther sucess in many things...
    she was jus doin her own thang,
    causin the winds to bless her face
    and whisper wonders
    that carried to the 4 corners of the earth...

    relaxed, perfect, whole, uncaring...
    beautiful...

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like she's just true to herself, and yes, that is beautiful. You expressed this so clearly.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome she ........tyte write
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STOOOORY mami this drop was hot I love the way you did this tooo beautiful:wink: :read:
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, i'm glad yall liked it, self-confidence in yourself is a VERY important thing in lyfe...can't let yourself be defined by others...or u'll lose yaself..enjoyed droppin this, and i'm glad yall liked it...
    :heart:
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this made me giggle a little ...
    because Beauty...has a way of sometimes
    seeming arrogant...but in fact
    it is what it is...
    an absolute...

    Beautiful...

    The imagery in this piece was phenomenal...

    you get a 10...on this one
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol beauti is just confident in herself, thas all...glad u liked it...
    :heart:
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    This script was indeed very interesting and on point...a woman in her own world...
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yup thas wassup, this chick got it coin on to, this is a prime example of what can happen when u take care of yourself...glad u liked it...
    :heart: :grin:
    -story
     
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