Quiet Poetry Lounge : BEAUTIFUL U ......

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Golden tresses and flowing
    black mixed sandy hair
    a perfect face with skin so fair

    A warm heart of lovin care
    i see her through the window
    of vision

    A generous mouth
    with full lips
    healthy waist wit perfect hips

    swaying in the wind as she dance
    have my heart in a trance as she
    prance cross the mind she was a
    beauty of sunshine so devine

    long smooth legs and ample bust
    beautiful brown eyez that scream
    out lust
    cascading deep in vow
    taken me up into a cloud
    my love bang beatin like drums
    how i lone to get me some !

    A man's silent dream
    she so perfect as it seem
    i'm like wheat she like cream
    she smile upon me wit kindness
    i feel the luminescence of her
    inner beauty as it transcends
    all she pose as i pass this rose

    A twisted thought to be sin
    with such beauty deep within
    that gives me trembles & shakes
    what she do to me
    O' my goodness sake

    so from the fresh fruit of vines
    softly , sweetly mush it to wine
    as i dine the time of thoughts
    from her desired scent that lures
    me into da labyrinth of her life
    with love and spice

    she pose an essence of innocence
    it can't be a sin i feel it to deep in
    i'm laced by the sound of her
    my love and heart has made a choice
    and the wonder of her lyrical voice
    speaking in ink as it kiss the paper
    and call out from the depth of her
    moving light

    O' sweet beauty !
    O' sweet beauty !
    forth art thou
    my beloveth i stand
    not in the whisper
    to behold the grace
    but lay in the rapture
    of your beings i so loveth u
    like millions of winds
    dancing in the radiant light
    cometh take thee hand
    as we shade into a spool of
    foreverness i weep not but cry
    the joy of our hearts that loveth
    become us in the temple
    so i'll rest in the slumber of u
    in my deep chamber of mind .

    O' sweet beauty
    :donttell: but :insane: because i luv u :hearts3:
    this all my vision can see day in and day out
    :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4: :hearts4:


    A Dyamondluv splash
    Nu~wave 2005 Creation
    $R
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww a romantic by heart and soul....i won't tell
    this graced with pure essence of a true love :hearts4:

    .my beloveth i stand
    not in the whisper
    to behold the grace
    but lay in the rapture
    of your beings i so loveth u
    like millions of winds
    dancing in the radiant light
    cometh take thee hand
    as we shade into a spool of
    foreverness i weep not but cry
    the joy of our hearts that loveth
    become us in the temple
    so i'll rest in the slumber of u
    in my deep chamber of mind .


    i fell in love :donttell:



    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awe yes Angel when the heart cross the mind
    of a feeling that takes u into this motion ya true
    hope in the grace that love now become and from
    the window of my mind i see and vision the beauty
    of my heart .

    Thank u so much for the warmth u give and bring
    Da $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now Rich, this one just takes me...This was quite a touching scribe, it just oozes with love brotha poet. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmm!
    yes Watz as the river mind flow
    the love grow deeper for she is
    my vision a dream as the beauty
    of it clash with reality i feel her
    near me now i can scream .......

    Thankz a million for the love
    this piece means a lot to me
    as it sit in my space of reasons.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a thing of beauty it must be nice to be so very talented.
    Again you amazed me thank you for this right
    It ws beautiful. :jump:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most humble welcome soulful2006
    we all grow as days go by u have a
    wonderful skill i too enjoy your creation
    thank u .
     
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    She enchants you with her beauty

    You enthral us with such grace.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz brutha 1poet it's all in the beauty the
    heart and mind pose from the window of vision
     
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