Black Poetry : BEAUTIFUL U

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Zesty u are
    so very exuberating
    so warm of existance
    u exhilarates my soul
    forever yielding
    a marvelous wonder
    my heart cascade
    behold the magnificent
    faithfulness of ur love
    da loyality u exemplify
    u become my strength
    as i your sustenance
    of reasons
    inside the great temple
    ur preserver sweetly
    inhabitant my love
    ur beauty screams
    and da silken lace of hair
    lock deep i know my
    hunger this crave
    i taste the moment of us
    melting from ya sway
    who can match your great
    magnitude of steadfastness

    my beloveth be not of thy dreamth
    escape me not for thy heart weeps
    in da chambers of comfort of thee
    i so lone to touch and giveth thee
    my loveth so forth i confess me

    Amazingly ur da gift a treasure
    delectable and sweet beyond measure
    satisfying my thrist da serenity u bestow
    i feel ever so humble my beautiful Queen
    ur my majestic passive way into reality
    together we are the strength of beings
    i become the sun flower u thy Queen Bee
    i be thy honeysuckle u can take all of me
    i'm the rapture of captivity
    i so shall never cease to adore ya beauty
    i so found within deep to the outter shell
    sweet , sweet .
    Beautiful u
    :flowers: :hearts1: :hearts2: :ilu: :hearts1: :blowkiss: :flowers:

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    very tight and beautiful flow my brother i so felt ever word......very sweet and thoughtful..true love is hard to find hold on to it!!!!
     
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    Thankz sista Angel there be nothing like da warm embracement of two
    ya words go deep ............................................................................
     
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    And every line was true to the title...simply beautiful. It's as though your pen was gliding along the page, floating in the flow. This was lovely poet.
     
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    thankz watz it was in motion and the feel was there expressing a destiny
     
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    beautiful u
    who can do it like u
    nobody
    who can give u what u need
    nobody but me
    floating ova thy bed tonight
     
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    And the beauty just keeps on floating in our midsts poet.
     
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    thank u sista as da beauty floats on
     
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    you gone float ova my bed baby? is it only gone be a float on you gone land....:grin:
    Yanno I had to dip back in...:wink:
     
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    float ova , under , in however u like
    word ...........
     
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