Black Poetry : Beautiful People

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Laydee Chups, Jul 29, 2003.

  1. Laydee Chups

    Laydee Chups Active Member MEMBER

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    Hey what's up ppl. Pulled another one of my disappearing acts but I'm in a state of crisis. Memba I said I thought I'd lost my flow?? I think I have. Seriously. And if it's writers block then this is the worst I have ever experienced in my entire life. I haven't written a ting in over 4 months and it's getting from bad to worse. :(

    Anyway, enough of my whining, this is something I pulled out of the fretwork.


    "Beautiful People"


    There they are
    The privileged
    Beautiful, wonderful and adored
    Eloquent, refined
    The beautiful people

    They're special
    They know they are
    Allowed to do whatever, however, whenever
    Worshipped like idols, they can do no wrong
    The beautiful people

    And there they are
    In their beautiful houses
    Surrounded by beautiful things
    With their beautiful friends
    Wearing beautiful smiles on their beautiful faces
    And I stand here alone
    Because beautiful is something I'm not.

     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot....well written...
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked it :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet flow u have it stored way deep down inside
    i see u just open the flood gate to poetry poetically
    dis was tyte scribing
    no blocks
    no lost
    just stored away deep inside
    let it out , let it flow
     
  5. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was tyte and well written. I'm feelin your flow. Flow on' gurl.
     
  6. Laydee Chups

    Laydee Chups Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you. All of you. Believe it or not this was actually written during the better days but it is comforting to know you still enjoyed it.
     
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