Quiet Poetry Lounge : BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Jun 14, 2006.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can this be true,
    I have allowed my heart to welcome you,
    With open arms and some open fears,
    Of this intimate Journey that we have embarked on.
    Both not knowing what the future may hold,
    D***, that’s BOLD.
    Living for this moment, for this second, for this minute,
    I guess sometimes you just have to jump right in it.
    I’m loving the way you make me feel,
    And losing sense of time when I’m with you,
    Never wanting it to end.
    But knowing all good things have one.
    Really not concerned with how or when it will be.
    I think I will just enjoy this Beautiful Journey,
    You have arranged exclusively for me.
    I don’t need any luggage or an itinerary.
    Because I know you will take care of all my needs.
    I could not turn around even if I wanted to.
    NO REFUND – NON TRANSFERRABLE,
    Baby, I’m caught up in you.
    So I will kick back and relax,
    Savor the flavor of this experience you are giving me,
    As if it was a smooth shot of Hennesey.
    A BEAUTIFUL JOURNEY
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This ride made for two
    where it can comfort u
    take u up deep & high
    like ya body touching da sky
    it's lable wit many fears
    but never worry have no tears
    it's a journey of tender cares
    dat ya mind can relax and bare
    once upon the glide
    u need no ticket not one bag
    just keep da luv ya soul had
    bring a smile that will do
    yes my sweet like a wish come true
    by design all for you
    let ya intimacy flo inside da glo
    it will last as long as u wish
    because by fate it's a gift
    to bring a journey of happiness twist
    from such beauty as morning dew
    into da midnight of lovin true
    soon da fears will reverse into a
    welcome journey verse..................

    Let not ya fears trouble u
    open arms love like glue
    and feel the joy of just two
    when da happiness shower u
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$,

    Another untouchable piece. I would not dare to, attempt to, add ANYTHING to that. You killn' me, softly though. You are too sweet. I so luv the reply. Stuff like that you just have to savor. Thank you so much.
    I got mad Luv for ya boy.:luvv:
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    "Living for this moment, for this second, for this minute,
    I guess sometimes you just have to jump right in it.
    I’m loving the way you make me feel,
    And losing sense of time when I’m with you"

    wow...that's a great write....4ever.....that stanza says so much in such little space....so true, so true...

    ill be readin so you keep writing

    RICH....you are just a endless fountain of flows....im amazed at how you do what you do....
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    abstract:

    Thank you once again, for your words of kindness.
    Much Luv
     
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