Black Poetry : Beautiful Blak

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  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The most beautifullest thing in this world...
    is a blak woman.
    From the light enough 2 be mistaken 4 white,
    2 the dark enough 2 be camouflaged by the night.
    And that way they talk...
    With their heads.
    Don't disrespect, cuz the words that shoot from those
    beautiful thick lips is enuf 2 make the devil cry.
    That "don't **** with me" attitude
    gets some dudes disheviled, but why?

    When U show me U won't take any of my sh*t,
    I see U won't take it from noone.
    Won't run if U see me get attacked,
    and won't scream "Leave Him Alone"
    and helplessly jump on someone's back.
    My lovely blak sisters.
    Who've protected hers & self 4 centuries past & 2 come...
    She...
    Who doesn't need a man 2 validate her life, but wants 1,
    cuz it has its benefits.

    *** is magnificently proportionate 2 her physique.
    From the petite 2 sizes in the teens she receives stares &
    D*MN!s
    She has the power 2 give a brother the ugly face.
    I love the race I'm blessed 2 be a member of
    cuz blak woman...
    U are the prototype of true woman.

    Know how they say "U look beautiful when You're angry"?
    I think U look beautiful becuz you're angry.
    With every right 2 be.
    I won't list them, but a lot of 'em have 2 do with us.
    We give lust our full attention
    letting it cloud our better judgement...
    We renege on trust, forgettin' about the respect of lovin'.
    Neglectin' someone who's been our souls' mates since the Almighty created we.
    Impatiently we embrace she's of different races,
    leaving our Queens unguarded 4 the taking.
    And they're aimin' 4 U straighter than ever.

    So I vow 2 stay true.
    I'll be alone if I can't be with U.

    Blak woman.

    Beautiful blak woman.

    My beautiful blak woman.



    Chrisis (c)copyright 2004
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...And....Wow, again. This was such a beautifully written scribe for us sisters, loving us simply because. :)
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok let me hug you now :grouphug:
    This was lovely my brotha...:luvv:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mad tyte drop felt it and know it so well
    let it be heard bruh !
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you, no doubt got me jumping all over the place with a smile on my face.. :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
    to know that some of our Black Brothers are in our corner...and know our WORTH!!!!
    much love to ya...queentswana
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so serious
    This needs to be reread
    Beautiful Poet
    The is a perfect one to me
    Much Love
     
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