Black Poetry : Beautiful Black Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Dec 5, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all my friends I want to share a short story.....


    About the "Beautiful Black Woman" in all of her Glory
    This Beautiful Black Woman so Luscious and Sweet
    A gift from God the Blackmans treat

    More precious than "Gold, Diamonds and Pearls
    This Black Beauty is the Mother of all worlds
    Called by names I wish not repeat
    But I guess I must for you to know her deep

    ****, Whore and the one that starts with a "B"
    These words and more I just can't see
    She's My Queen, My Moon and My Earth
    This Beautiful Black Woman centers my Universe

    So Intelligent, Sweet and yet so Strong
    All the bull**** around her she has endured for so long
    Single Mother of 1 or 2
    "Dead Beat Dads" just to name a few

    But still she walks with her head held high
    Filled with much ambition as she passes by
    With goals set in Life she will not fail
    She has weathered the storm "The Rain, Snow" and "The Hail"

    She has the "Heart of Gold" with the "Persona" to match
    Using weak come-on-lines this Black Beauty you will won't catch
    She's to "Smart" and "Clever" for Playa Games
    And when she don't respond is when you want to call her these names

    Disrespeting her is not the way to go
    She's just into "Strong Black Brothas" with that smooth type of flow
    Her Attributes are uncompared
    Now "White Girls" getting work done and getting repairs

    My Queen stand tall you are a walking success
    With you by my side I could have no stress
    You are My World, My Pride and Joy
    I've Admired your style since I was a boy

    "My Confidant", "My Companion" you are "My Best Friend"
    Forever I will Love you til the very end
    Soul mate is how I describe you
    No One could appreciate you as much as I do

    Sister, Mother, Aunt, Wifey
    Life is what you've given to me
    From the "Bounce in your walk" to the "Sway in your hips"
    From your "Soultry Eyes" to your "Sensuous Lips"

    I Love you Beautiful from head to toe
    You're so captivating, you just don't know
    From Lawyers to Dancers you see
    You all mean the same to me

    "Black" and "Beautiful" in your own unique way
    While dealing with different struggles each and every day
    Obstacles you conquer with leaps and bounds
    Never allowing negativity to keep you down

    You're like Victoria Secrets or more like a "Wonder" to me
    As I look at you I'm filled with much passion and glee
    You are the Essence within my every existence
    And it is your heart I seek with persistence

    "Oh Yes" Black Beauty thats who you are to me
    Standing there with such grace and poetry
    So Black Woman continue elevating just as you are
    Cause there is no one that can touch your existence by far

    Caramelpython 11 28 2003
     
  2. Zen Master_1

    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Yes

    caramelpython, You have created a Masterpiece and beautiful Nubian Queens earn that respect so long ago, with them where would we really be, that is something we all need to keep in mind. Continue with the glory and thanks for sharing.
     
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    ...and our strength is inspired by Strong, Beautiful Black Men like you... thank you for this.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet of the week
    you have just out
    done yourself....
    thats all i can say
    much love....:angel1:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NO YOU ARE...!

    SO BEAUTIFUL TO ME U R!
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done top honors here
    lovin this piece of art
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aw man this is beautifull with this Poem you give it away .....To the brothers to
    its so beautifull that a man dares to express himself that way and let his woman Shine :star:


    just beautifull ...

    keep writting and expressing Poet..




    Love L
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such an eloquent tribute...flow on...you sure have shone your true colors in this one.
     
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    oh my goodness
    you you you
    what can i really say
    loving how you vibe
    much love and repsect
    this is so on wow:grouphug:
    Peace
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww :grouphug:
    my :heart: is so moved by this dedication :)
    our blak kings...where would be without you :look: :)
     
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