Black Poetry : Beautiful Black Moon

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Twofish, Jan 28, 2002.

  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful black moon
    You thought no one could see you in hiding
    During the beginning of a new cycle
    You are masked among the other heavenly bodies
    But I searched the vast realms of the skies
    Until a vague orb was within my sight
    And I witnessed you
    In all of your splendor…
    although seemingly invisible you were to most
    I FOUND YOU
    With the blessing of the divine
    I felt you, and therefore…
    Witnessed your brilliance
    Even though your light is not full tonight
    Even though you are hidden from view
    Still blessed I was to have seen you
    For I know you exist
    I always knew
    Despite whether I had ever witnessed

    I’m in bliss…
     
  2. poeticdelight

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    o-kay

    keep writing girl

    just keep writing

    pd :)
     
  3. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sis...

    ...I know how
    you feel :wink:.
    It is definitely
    a wonder-filled
    thing...

    you know I
    feel about your
    poetry girlie...:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    2fish

    looking sis.... i see da blk moon under
    da glist of stars above......flow on sis...:D
     
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    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish

    -poem- two thumbs up!!:D

    keep writing and as always SMILE!:x:
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmmmm...

    In bliss hugh!
    What a wonderful piece poet!
    Tyte!
    :)
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish

    Nice flo.


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always a pleasure to read you poet...

    one.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spectacular piece like only you bring it.

    nfinite
    jh.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful piece.......
     
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