Black Poetry : beating of your heart...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Sep 25, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I reached for your hands
    and intertwined them with mine
    You kissed my forehead
    Took over my lips sweet as wine

    I hoisted myself on my arm
    To capture the bliss on your face
    Trace my fingers on your cheek
    I never wanted to leave that place...

    I laid atop of you
    And I was not about to let you enter
    My love for you did reach new levels
    And your smile was at my center

    I put my breast upon your chest
    and listened quietly with my ear
    The steadiness of your breathing
    and the pulse I did hear

    I felt the beating of your heart
    It pulsated into my veins
    I felt your emotion enter my body
    felt the erotic memories like rain...

    I fell asleep laying there
    This time with my hand over your heart
    I fell into a dreamworld...
    Wishing that a relationship would start
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not one of my better pieces....but eh...work with me here..i gotta get back into my groove
     
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    i like it...
     
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    SwtT - you just may be wrong... I thought this was a sweet dream and hoping it comes true for you, too.
    :heart:
    Sweet as you are, your words.
    :wave:
    hey...
     
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    ooooh, this was passionate with a hint of heat...
    like the way u structured it

    I know I love to fall asleep to the sound of a heatbeat
    some how I feel theres that point when each of you let go

    they beat in sequence...
     
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    Hmmmmmmmmm new love is divine!

    This was a classy erotic prose that kept a smooth pace and made it an easy and captivating read.
    Blessings on Your House!
     
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    I liked it too. There's nothing better than falling asleep to the heartbeat of someone you love.
     
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    Awww now that is just simply beautiful. I hope everything works out for you. This was so nice... makes me want something like that.
     
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    this is lovely SwT
    feeling the peacefulness
    the beauty
    in your flow..
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    whateva gurl this was hot :)
     
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