Black Poetry : beatdown

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  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i thought i won
    i thought i seriously kicked your ***
    i mean...
    it was like
    my adrenaline was pumping
    my determination was like... there
    the left hook
    the right hook
    the consistent consciousness
    the combinations
    staying alive
    staying alert
    sitting in that corner
    still fighting you
    with my mind
    strategies
    my corner saying
    'you got that'
    'you're ahead'
    and then...
    it happened
    11:42 at night
    the last round
    i just couldn't fight anymore
    resistance was futile
    i felt like a punk
    but
    i just couldn't fight anymore
    that one hit
    that one fatal hit
    that had me down for the count
    and there was nothing left to do
    but get up
    dragging my feet
    my head down
    hands slack upon half numb arms
    and take my *** to bed
    cuz me
    trying to fight sleep
    when i know i got to get up in the a.m....
    that's a losing battle.

    :nuts:

    diva08 (c) 2k2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    gurl u know i lost so many fights so many battles
    but guess what i won a few ..........but **** i was
    beat after wards too... i gotta go !
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****,
    you should see me, i'm like your boy mike tyson all beat down til i'm actin' nice and wierd...

    *goin' to bed* in an hour :D
     
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    Diva...I liked this one.....
     
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    Lol!

    I love it! Hell im tryin to fight sleep hea at work! lol

    Reas
     
  6. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm so glad u people feel me.
    mad love.

    d
     
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    Ms Diva...always working the words. loved it.

    BE
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dig the way you laid it down
    Very enjoyable read.
    Great piece! and nice title.


    Scribeaboutit! It helps
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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