Black Poetry : Beasts of my own Making!

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  1. One9_Arch

    One9_Arch Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These ...

    Beasts of my own making ...
    Ever anxious to win my favor;
    Have failed to present me proper
    And shall suffer for it.

    They present themselves in a cloak
    Stained, but purified;
    Yet wicked remains wicked
    In the absence of repentance.

    No gifts of gold or precious stones were given me
    So arrogant as to relegate me lower than he be;
    Who in his youth openly murdered my dream
    And left me in the street
    Never once even offering an apology.

    No justification for actions committed
    Against my Tribe;
    Against God, humanity, and
    The peaceful dignity of my Kind.

    Sneaking ‘round full of deception
    This Wicked offspring of the Harlots passion
    Bloodbaths ...
    He’s Rep’n a whole new Order;
    Kill ya for ya color
    Set you up and have you murdered by ya brothers.

    These beasts of my own making ...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaa!!! i can relate on this and see it so well
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I believe that everyone has to answer for their sins, but world of destruction can happen before just deserts. I feel the intensity of your words.
     
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