Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Nov 23, 2004.
...Bearing Your Cross ~~~
this was sweetly posed and warmly done sista flow on
strength and security
amidst the obscruity of this unknown journey ahead
understand the futuristic hope in the solace of found love
so stand and withal
at each others side strong enough for the the fight
casting out all fear
your fam here cheering you on.
Thanks for the tantalizing drop still thirsting
The poem itself, so rich in its depth of description of the offering. The sentiment, wow, to be there in that special one's time of need, is priceless. So endearing sage, it warms the heart.
Havin trouble finding the words to describe how this piece makes me feel.....it's soothing like a cup of hot tea, warm like your favorite blanket, beautiful like the sun rays........
Sister, what can I say - you're amazing.
a beautiful poem sage..
rich in description
lush with emotion
You always paint a lovely picture of dedication, love and strength my sister sage....
Love how u keep ya head up and your heart open!
that was beautiful, you have hooked up tha hook up man!!
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