Black Poetry : Bear with Me..

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  1. dreadpoet

    dreadpoet Member MEMBER

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    I want you to follow me in this.
    As sure as I dream, dreams..
    that outstretch my capacity,
    have the audacity to think and teach individualistic bliss..
    a stabilizing force in my midst,
    a foundation of supportive beams.

    You remind me of my savior!!!....
    as you say I remind you of yours
    but why then, am i readily confronted with mine
    but am not familiar with your flaws.

    Sometimes I want to give you eternity in a vase.. Some times.
    But why sometimes.
    Sometimes I know you can "do better" but,
    then again, no on can appreciate what you do like i can.

    For you i would endure 3 mother-in-laws
    5 drunk uncles
    2 more folks livin` in our home and tossin by cat smoke out into the street.
    But with you,... i don`t have to.

    Under your protection, I play like a child w/ a flashlight under covers..
    @ night you hold my hand as i hold yours.
    You know at that moment my weakness,
    but you do not speak it..
    ****!!.. you do not speak it.. thanx

    For you.. i would barter my mind and body
    let you pimp me
    I don`t mind.. giving you all my money and getting my piece.
    You can be my "Goldie". I am your sparkle.. luv..
    My soul fits tight like a glove
    inside your heart.

    As I grow.. you wait your turn
    but you grow with me.
    Giving me direction and control to match my pace.
     
  2. ryss77

    ryss77 Active Member MEMBER

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    make the people holla for more!!!

    dread, got to bring on the mathematical genius!!

    this is too:cool: for the touch!!
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dread

    Tyte scribe poet!

    Well written and erry thang! Do whatever it is that you do, just make sure you C o n t i n u e!!

    I felt this piece.


    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Dread da poet

    ya on point and bring 100% truth in dis piece
    shout it out so one may hear !! speak on .....:)
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brother nice work poet

    blak
     
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