Black Poetry : beach morning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Dec 4, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i awaken tangled with you in the sheets on this small bed
    the warm breeze from the ocean flowing through the window
    i watch you sleep for a while, then look out the window at the rising sun
    the sky painted pink and orange, purple and blue
    bright yellow cirrus clouds surrounding the sky invite me to enjoy the morning
    i slip into a dress and walk out to the empty beach
    birds glide above me making breakfast trips to and from the water
    the cool sand chills my feet at the waters edge
    i sit down and breathe in my surroundings
    the breeze caresses my hair and reminds me of that
    warm comfortable feeling i love
    the clear blue water laps softly against the sand
    i close my eyes to pray and thank God for life and this day
    i feel your presence behind me
    i turn around to see you smiling walking toward me
    you sit behind me and wrap your legs around mine
    start kissing the back of my neck
    sending chills from my spin down my arms and back
    your hands explore my body and prepare me for you...
    we make love at the waters edge
    in the midst of nature and the morning
    you make me smile only the way you can

    every morning should be like this.
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    every morning should!!

    i love the picture that you created here! it's just so lovely...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now dis makes me wanna go home
    back to bed .....lovely scribe gurl!
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes keep painting
    good stuff
    flow on
     
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    k0k0 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ****.

    talk about a nice way to say "good morning!"

    diggin it
     
  6. Miss_EducateU

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    No one makes scenarios like you, girl, ****!
    "masterpiece"
     
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    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think a felt a drop
    of oceans water in my mind...

    Excellent description

    NittyGritt ReddClay
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: every morning should!!

    yes indeed it is
     
  9. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank y'all so much for the love!!! i SO appreciate it.
     
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    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful- very descriptive.
     
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