Black Poetry : Beach Ceremony

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    looking across beach sands
    through clear blue water

    i see sun beams beyond the horizon
    soundwaves crash against the shore
    as i sit and watch writing a love poem
    to mi amore

    standing one on one we hold hands
    making special time for wedding plans

    we both understand our path lies in GOD's
    hands beyond the diamond encrested wedding band

    things take time to grow
    yet and still i love him so

    but who holds the highest power
    ultimately we reap what we sow

    looking across beach sands
    through clear blue water

    sun beams appear beyond the
    horizon soundwaves crash against
    the shore

    as we sit and watch for what love has
    in store



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    again thanx Richy Rich

    glad you enjoyed the read

    pd

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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanx Sherykah

    i enjoy your beautiful work as well

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    Took me back to my own...

    Simply exquisite when we "Live Out Loud", this poem brought back memories, though I regret getting married without all my family and friends. There was something so sacred about exchanging my vows with the man I (then) loved and two friends and a preacher. At sunrise on a beach in St. Croix. I think that memory like all of my good ones will stay with me forever.
    Blessings On ya House!
     
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    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pretty. Real pretty, PD!

    Much :heart:
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    pure imagination mslusciousb

    purely my wonderful imagination :lol:

    thanx for the compliment

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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanx MsBerry

    you are always complimenting my work

    thank you :)

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    Poetic D,
    Something about sand and blue waters
    always makes a romantic scene...worth experiencing..
    Beautiful piece...

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanx epiphany

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