Black Poetry : Bayou Interlude

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Under the moonbeam
    Day into night dream
    Two lay down in a field
    of lilacs near the stream
    The bed of petals cushion
    the weight of this bliss
    playfully frolicking
    locked in a kiss
    Garments tossed aside
    inhibitions in a hush
    as hands and mouths find creative ways
    to make the starry eyes blush
    Such a sensual aroma the night air emits
    when sweet flowers and salty sweat mesh,
    tempted souls at last become one
    as love ignites the flesh
    The bayou calls out in screams
    Passion reaches its tormented peak
    as the stream erupts deep
    into the secret field near the creek...
    Under the moonbeam
    day into night dream
    two lay down in a field.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the romantic side of this had me into it
    this was tyte and very nice how u pose'd it
    to canvas
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you liked this Rich, just trying to keep the flows coming. Thanks for the support.
     
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    this is a wonderful scence of romance...wow:)
    you are indeed flowing
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Blue for such a nice response, your support is appreciated.
     
  6. SOULSTAR

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    What can i say hun except for ....Flow on Flow on!!!!.......

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your kind words of support, Soulstar.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You paint a great picture, sis. Diggin this.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy to know that you could envision this scene gempis, thanks.
     
  10. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man ma, you have me feeling so steamy. This is good!
     
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