Black Poetry : Battle Cry(Tell me what you think)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nfinite, Apr 22, 2004.

  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With this pen and this pad
    I slay my beast
    slay those who rise against me
    rebirth of a queen through the
    P E N
    And the P A D
    Reinvent me with words
    that looks through minds and seeks knowledge
    looks through eyes and seeks wisedom
    these words have been manifested
    deep in my chest and
    pumps through my blood
    through sweat and tears
    i've cried to regain my crown
    I CAN'T GO DOWN!
    I WON'T GO DOWN!
    And i guess that's the fury that feeds my fuel
    or for better the fuel that feeds my fury
    my eyes blurry
    but my sight clear
    set on the goal
    of saving souls
    and the time is near!
    the time is here and I WON'T STOP
    Been handed the baton and I won't drop
    i won't stop racing
    seeking the faces
    of those who seek knowledge
    consumed in bondage
    and the mission won't cease
    with my pen and my pad I slay my beast.
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *whew* dis was hot forreal mmmannn i felt this deep, i feel the same way bout some of my writings...
    :heart:
    -story
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wooooah that was off the thermostat I felt that heat tearin' up some paper lol....Flow on :peace:
     
  4. PurpleMoons

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    Slay on poet!
    Tyte drop!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well pose'd i feel ya poet !
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Taking those words and hitting them with thoughts and knowledge, I liked this, and welcome to destee.
     
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    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...thank you for being bold
     
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