Black Poetry : BATHROOM

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This morning shocked by an alarming clock sounding bold
    Awaken me now taking a pea flush commode rush to hold
    A tooth brush now teeth white, unique site now peek bright
    Crave for a shave the Magic Cream tragic it seem must fight
    It burned my chin, concern when that happens, that junk
    Get old use Bump Patrol, deep swelling keeps me yelling like chumps
    Smile galore standing on a tile floor facing the basin embracing
    And erasing the motor of odor with Right Guard while erasing
    The thunder alarm of under arm odor, my bathtub’s clean
    On path love Listerine, fast goggles from glass bottles seem
    To throttle my outlook and refresh my breath, faucet water ran
    Like maple sap but able to slap some on nothing could slaughter my plan
    Simple and clearer see pimples in the mirror grab a potion of lotion
    Shea Butter may utter softness to my skin a costless blend like an ocean
    My bath bloom in the bathroom, walls are sheet rock it’s all
    A complete plot to start the day to be elite and hot all day yall
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice
    tight flowing madd
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MADD u still droppin it red hot up in here
    flow on bruh !!
    bathroom drama
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The way we start the day...keep the rhythm going.
     
  5. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADDRAPPER HEAR ME IF YOU PLEASE

    Key word is elite
    YOU know that good
    you do well to speak
    great words from high
    last line is all so me
    Great poem I did read

     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    madd...i read this piece and the word bathroom caught my eye and i started DYING laughing when i read this...the whole magic shave (when it burns i get concerned) HILARIOUS...you are soo talented...enjoyed the read.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE RESPONSES FOR REAL YALL
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your flow
    do indeed bring a smile
    nice drop Mad:)
    starting the day
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well allright now!!!
    that was hot.
    Nice flow.
     
  10. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THAT GIRL AND BLUEWATER THANKS FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL YALL
     
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