Khasm13 : bathroom bizarrrrr...

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  1. Khasm13

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    at tender ages
    young pages
    in a book barely written
    one baby was bitten
    by the sexual urges in splurges
    when innocence merges with lustful surges
    it's a shame when family is da virginity murders...

    da scene...

    parents not home
    but i'm still not alone
    my aunt is here still on da phone
    in my lil mind, her intentions are not known
    cause previously only love was shown
    off da phone
    she dips to da bathroom
    then she asks me to fill up the red water bottle
    like a balloon
    young and obedient, i fill it up
    and notice the full moon
    then i hand it to auntie
    and she closes the door to the bathroom
    minutes past...and unknown to me lust looms
    da door opens...come here nephew
    you gotta promise not to tell anyone this
    no matta who...
    do you promise?
    do.....you........................................promise???
    sure auntie.....i promise
    but if i knew then what i know now
    i would have vommit...
    morals far from omish
    she made me eat her out
    to the point she start to moan
    then scream
    then shout...
    i was just following instructions
    that lead me too this sexual abduction
    suckin
    fresh kitty cat
    at the tender age of 4
    too young to know the score
    while she gyrated on her back
    what was taken
    i can neva get back
    even after years of time in between
    i still look back
    at that night
    of the sexual attak
    so fickle i am with my choices of women
    because of that
    it's crazy how some experiences
    can stick in your mind like a thumb tack
    i got jacked
    playin the oochie coochie game
    and it's so wack...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep smh..most think it only can happen to little girls when it goes both ways..i liked how you brought this...a sad reality but truth cause it happens...flow head on..

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    The sick preys on all!!!
    Shine that light into
    the dark Brother!

    Flow on!
     
  4. Khasm13

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    thanks mba and purple...
    i try to leave no stone unturned in my poetry...
    thanks for feelin this...i know it was a ruff one ;)
    one love
    khasm
     
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    your skill level is somewhere over the rainbow brother...
    you got your own ozone...

    all i can say is umph, umph, umph
    and thanks for your courage...

    this really pisses me off
    and i guess poetry is supposed to do that too...
     
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    MAN THIS HERE SHINE A RADIANT DIPPER
    FLOW ON LOVE YA FLOWZ KHASM............
     
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    You are a brave poet for this...
    but sometimes through our poetry
    we overcome, to some degree
    when you can talk about it
    it doesn't sting as bad...
    but it doesn't take away
    the violation of innocence
    committed...
    so many people think this
    only happens to females but
    we would be suprised to know
    what males are subjected to
    in their youth...as well as how
    many of us have the same stories
    hidden away insided of us.

    Felt this piece...
    Always passionate about protecting our youth...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I find myself at a loss for words (and you know me lol) when i read this.
    There are only so many PEOPLE, let alone POETS, brave enuff to speak out on such a mostrosity as this one...
    I applaud you
    I honor your essence my brotha king
    I :bowdown: :grouphug:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My mouth was agape during this read. Not just because of the subject matter, which is, just shameful, but at the way you took the subject and brought it boldly to the page, in your poetic style. Props to you brotha.
     
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    Oh, Khasm. My words can't convey the respect I have for you for this piece. I've known a few women dear to me who have had to endure this, so I really really am with you here. Much love to you as you continue to drop the blow and the flows. :heart: Peace, brother, and respect.
     
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