Black Poetry : Barry Bond's Hope (3 haikus)

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I
    His little girl begged,
    "Please pitch to my daddy...please".
    Bonds hits 70.


    II
    Magical season
    In persuit of 70
    Barry's dream captured.


    III
    Congratulations
    Hats off to you Barry Bonds.
    Extraordinary!!!


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    I am very proud of (but know that I am an Atlanta Braves fan)Barry Bonds. He did 70 in a shorter season.
    Because of the 9/11 attacks on America, he had to accomplish his dream minus several (seven?) cancelled games.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, i'm proud of him, too. your talent with haikus is tyght. thanks for sharing this one with us all.
     
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    beautifully said

    as he pass the big Mac at 71 in the short coming of life's
    ball game he beat da odds.................thank u Berry *:toast:
     
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