Black Poetry : barriers...breaking

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  1. Queen_of_Spades

    Queen_of_Spades Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Barriers...breaking

    Where did you come from?

    How dare you come and grace my path when I told you I was giving this love stuff up? :eek:

    After the pain of the last one, I said I was through....

    Yet, lo and behold, here comes you!

    You pick a mighty fine time to be constantly on my mind; have me constantly wondering...

    "How are you?"

    You have me yearning to hear your voice like my lungs need air, the rise and fall of your syllables got my inner ears dripping for audio arousal...

    ****..see what you done did

    You rise with the sun and stay in my mental sky, even in the blanket of night. I dare to seek knowledge of your skin, your bodily musk. I demand to know the feel of your lips, the heat of your body upon mine's...the...

    oh my!

    is that...

    yes


    My id has come out of hibernation, making its' presence felt on mounds and between thighs...

    you don't realize what you done started...

    If you did, this never would have begun. In fact you should run before I melt the steel bars I have around my heart with the torch of my growing feelings for you...the impact they could have...I've got intensity and fire with temperatures exceeding Mercury.

    Do you dare be so bold?

    I warn you, you may get suck into the black hole of Love Resurrected.

    So if you don't want that, you better go back from whence you came...

    Although, to be quite honest, I wouldn't mind if you remained. :)

    © October 2002
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queenie,

    Once again you articulate the passions of your heart so beautifully and with boundless sincerity and emotion. You know I feel you deeply already. Peace.
     
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    hee hee loved this one feeling of luv i can relate to this one especially just kind of crept up on me no joking
     
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    Queen_of_Spades Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the response.
     
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    Let it flow and let it go!

    Feeling you my sista and know the feeling well. But you tell the story very , very well! My, my ,my! How do we get by?
    BLESSING ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep inner warmth from the heart that cascaded out
    the invade of love to love
     
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