Black Poetry : barbarian dream

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Oct 15, 2002.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when i wake up before you
    i lie there in awe of all we have accomplished
    our bedroom, cozy, warm, beautiful
    the king size bed
    the greens the browns, the wood
    the carpeting
    the way the pillows are scattered everywhere
    we like lots of pillows
    we sleep like bohemians
    i like to pretend you are a black conan
    i am his princess
    we some bad mothafu*kk*as
    i’m just buggin

    i can see you now with your horned helmet
    me with my leather strips for clothing
    my big *** tits are held tightly bound
    my stomach flat, my jewelry that of gold and feathers
    we drink henny out of a leather bladder
    you eat a big ole turkey leg
    okay I’m really trippin now
    actually it’s nice to hear your gentle breathing
    to see your strong leg slipping out from beneath the sheet
    your pretty brown skin
    your laughter loud and strong

    pretty soon the alarm will ring
    and I will have to start my day
    my leather strips replaced by corporate attire
    your turkey leg replaced by wallet and car keys
    you look so stern when you leave the house
    your face set into worry, mortgage, finances, mutual funds, 401 K’s
    can’t we just enjoy life a little more
    smile and laugh a little longer
    i like pretending you are Conan
    i wish you could pretend with me
    but I will pretend for the both of us
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnice! the imagery. I applaud you and this piece. CLASSIC

    turkey leg...henny from a leather bladder...classic
     
  3. sprinkles

    sprinkles New Member MEMBER

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    provides a very nice visual
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i do love the visuals...
    this piece is sweet! -7:spinstar:
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for feeling me flow.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...as i remember, Conan's female sidekicks were normally redheads.:)

    love the admiration you display for your mate.

    let the river flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was really tyght very nice
     
  8. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich, although when he read it he said it was embarassing! :lol:
     
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