Khasm13 : banished...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this is what i'm saying...

    banished from the land of the living
    for evil acts
    and mastering the art of not giving
    back
    when having wealth in abundance
    for this my soul is left
    in a state of encumbrance
    no longer watching the sun dance
    and the moon shimmy
    no longer having times of
    good and plenty
    cause now i roam wastelands
    a barren bottle left empty
    devoid of anything but darkness
    it's just me here
    and my equally evil partners
    who lived a lecherous life
    causing pain and strife
    spreading poison like a butter knife
    on the world
    slice by slice

    i walk in this dismal land
    of black sand
    knowing that i will sink
    if i stop to stand
    then where would i go?
    what further punishment awaits me below?
    i don't know
    and i don't wish to know
    therefore my tourtured soul
    must remain on the go
    as foul wind swirl and blow
    i see the light
    but it's too late
    i must pay this heavy toll
    ----------forever------------
     
  3. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MAD, MAD fresh Khas.....
    Such a visualization for me....
    It was totally breathtaking.......

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:

    Btw....if u check this today....sign on to AIM.
    peace
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you flowed with this piece...deep...mind provoking.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa !
    now dis was da bomb !
    u drop a masterpiece here love hold this took form
    of a piece of reality to be checked
    poet flow head on ...........
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You just continue to "wow" with your skillz! This flow was all that!
     
  7. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like always.... it was a pleasure to read and to be blessed by ur thoughts.

    Peace and blessings
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' this piece...deep...
     
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    fam,
    ya'll are a piece of my soul...
    thanks for chekin in on me...
    peace
    khasm
     
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