Khasm13 : bangin lunch tables...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    rippin keystyles neva duplicated
    neva faded is da style i created then updated
    herbs ate it but could digest it...the most hated
    since time was dated...dinasaurs have trouble with metaphors
    rhymes i'm slating are intoxicating like fine aged coors..i fought many wars
    cause da devil does scores of tours...city to city
    made many lives sh*tty in search of puff daddies like p diddy
    i started off banging lunch tables when i was itty bitty
    just to make the gurls giddy i became witty eye'n da kitty
    game reconize game so i show no pity....thas my committee
    hard knocks on massive blocks been round catz slingin rocks
    seen dime pieces sweatin jocks for what a cat gots
    cream'n for stocks and bonds locks with chizzled arms
    i has ta ring da alarm...when i see a soundbwoy dying
    whoa-ho-aye...da mental has ta keep da devil at bay
    at least until i feast on the sun from da east
    for 6 decades my plan laid is ready-made
    teach peace to my future seeds my nephew and niece
    afta that i'll be ready for release...from a world of anger filled with danger
    a short snippet from da diary of a lunch table banger....
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    go head poet...this was so tight...
    had to read it twice....likes ya style..:)

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flowing u took da riff off da raff keystyle
    love dis one bruh !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A short snippet for you is not a morsel, it's like a feast. Been rhyming for years I see, don't ever stop.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know ya got style and class...I like the way you laid this out.
     
  6. Khasm13

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    i can't express the total amount of gratitude
    that i have for da fams continual support...
    thanks fam
    one love
    khasm
     
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    man much love back @ ya too
    ya pen is mighty then da sword
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    khasm...khasm...khasm...

    ya girl is speechless...

    I mean really...

    :bowdown:
     
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    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    nothing I could say would be worthy.
     
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    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You go boy!!! You always put your thing down. No words can really express how I feel at this very moment. My mind is completely blank. I'm clueless to what to say. and you know for me to be a poet that's dam near impossible. Keep spittin fire, my love.

    Much love and Respect
    Poetic Sista
     
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