Black Poetry : Bang

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Inque, Jan 23, 2006.

  1. Inque

    Inque Active Member MEMBER

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    I’ve got angels in my head
    Heaven aint just for the dead
    I’ve walked the roads of fire and ice
    Searching for a paradise
    And now I’m on the other side
    Behind my wrongs I cannot hide
    And as I raise my open eyes

    I hear a bang
    That’s my sound
    Can’t be drowned
    By emotions spinning bound
    And I feel the rain
    Crystal droplets splashing freely on my face
    And I hear that sound
    Give me a bang
    That’s my sound
    Can’t be drowned
    By the crimson on the ground
    And I feel the rain
    Tainted water wash my sins and heal my pain
    And I hear that sound
    Bang bang bang
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very unique and tyte
    love the scribe of this joint Bang !
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very original...i liked this...
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: i like this unique flow, flow on poet.
     
  5. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Very nice and creative:kiss1:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful poet
    The bang is an eye opener
    One that cant be stopped
    Much Love Poet
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A bang-up job!

    Well done...
     
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