Black Poetry : Bambi Love

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im floating in a Bambi Love

    Sweet, Succulent Love from above

    That Honey Suckle love…

    of cool peppermint sensation

    Of chasing bunnies, and cream colored doves

    That bubbling brook kind of love

    I flutter my lashes over starry eyes,

    and kiss his face with satin gloves…

    He strokes me tenderly with soft fingertips

    and calls me his beloved

    Im over the moon, and resting peacefully in his warm cacoon

    happily therof

    He puts pink rose petals in my hair

    Cas he’s an angel sent from above

    And I know he wants me to melt inside his love…

    But What he doesn’t know

    Is that I melted long ago

    Still melting in his Bambi Love

    :flirt:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was so beautiful, very warm bambi love can be very mesmerizing
    when i get a love like this to embrace me surely i would say this world is mines


    Rest dear one inside da cocoon
    look upon da starz and moon
    hold grasp his unchange hand
    surely this would be your angel man
    I love how u dress this piece so well
    melting inside his bambi love
    knowing in heart he's from above
    and gliding on da wings of doves
    for this may i giveth a hug

    U really went there, it's nice to see u
    making stride to recapture the true u
    da woman inside of bambi love .....wow!
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes....that Bambi :heart: Love....is a love like no other.

    .....where the world melts like butter behind you and you began to drown

    and wish for no one to save you.....

    ......ahhhhh

    lol
     
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    I sho nuff agree .....talking bout a melt down
    i really like this one can i print this and put it on my poetry wall ?
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    please do...

    I hope it bathes you in the same soft fabrics, that I myself nestled in.

    Thank you so much.
     
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    No thank u ....
     
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    The Natural

    You're a natural, & SWEET as Apple Pie :juggle:

    Enjoyed reading you :hearts1:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes

    i knew i smelled hot buttered popcorn lol

    um S.A.P.

    you've done it to me and i don't like it lol

    I'M A FAN NOW!


    your work touches the soul EVERYTIME

    even when you talk smack

    so you know it's real

    lol

    peace

    i just loves me some apple pie especially when it's sweet

    hey that's a poem right der

    lol
     
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    I think i would love some of the bambi love
    beautifully expressed applw*pie
    i really felt this one
    :great:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, thanks so much for kind words 1poetsought. I just want that cuddly kind of love you know? Its time to bring tha sweetness back! Fightin' with your mate is so 2008. he he he....Im already lookin at '09...wanna a love so fine I can drink it like a sm o o t h wine.



    Thank goodness! I thought I was gonna have to hog tie you, to love me! Just teasin! Thanks so'ja for your very generous words here. And as far as the pie? How you gonna ask for a slice, when I requested your friendship on your profile almost two weeks ago, and left you a message. You replied to me not. And now...im sad....lol
    :em4600:


    Thanks JDN! It was a nice break from those emotional drama flows won' it?

    :em2300:
     
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