Black Poetry : Bam!

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  1. Salaam1

    Salaam1 Member MEMBER

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    Saw a man falter, leanin' against a raggedy *** truck.
    Slump down, slide to the ground...BAM!
    Just now...just up the street from multiple crack outlets.
    Broad daylight front of the liquor store he hit the parking lot pavement...BAM!
    Couldnt ignore the event
    Its all I saw 'sides the **** colored bricks of the N. Dallas projects and bloodshot eyes of his drinkin' compadres, even they tripped...just for a 'sec thinkin he had left them to the spin cycle of requests to and from passing vehicles and liquor store patrons...bus stop ..stop sign...broken *** sidewalk **** talkin' trick catchin corner became...just for a 'sec...just a corner...where I saw a man falter, leanin' against a raggedy *** truck. Slump down, slide to the ground...BAM!
    Lyin' there still..too still...all froze all felt chills down spines...I saw it in their eyes and I know they saw that **** in mine....
    Here today....BAM!................gone tomorrow.


    Rallah Salaam Shabazz
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dope...definite satisfaction

    Classic work poet do yo' thang!

    LMAO

    one love, blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    great tyte write doing it up i see ......