Black Poetry : Balance

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  1. Inque

    Inque Active Member MEMBER

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    You and I are Yin and Yang
    Opposite and yet the same
    Two halves of one unquestionable whole
    You, the body
    I, the soul

    You and I are Earth and Sun
    A combination creating one
    Seamless together yet flawed apart
    I, the mind
    You, the heart

    You and I are Sand and Sea
    Intertwining endlessly
    Melded in moments like a rhythmic wave
    We that search
    We that crave
     
  2. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a pretty poem. I don't know any other word to describe it, but it is really "pretty"!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Well versed to perfection ....in balance
     
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    Im glad I came to read today, you have just been added to my list of poets I must read daily

    Nice drop
     
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    - Beautiful.......................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this scribe of such complementary spirits, and the flow was so smooth. Wonderful write.
     
  7. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed the read
     
  8. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww shucks.....i realli liked this poem it made me wanna call my man and tell him how much i love him!!! :hearts1:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really enjoyed this flow.....
     
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