Black Poetry : BAD MOOD

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  1. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BAD MOOD

    Drunk and sick
    ugly and thick
    stupid and slow
    smiling even though
    actually I don’t feel
    like it
    Right now feel
    like isht
    Mad and dissapointed
    lazy and sins
    jealous, insecurity
    I feel everything
    but pure
    Passing moods
    I need to release
    get my self together
    try to find some peace
    But than
    abandoned and alone
    self-pity
    sitting at home
    Ooooh life is so sad
    makes me angry and mad
    makes me miserable and cry
    This is how I feel sometimes.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wordz poetically make it all better
    feelin u on dis and tyte how u broke it down
     
  3. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't we all....liked this!
    E
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like how you posed this nice
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I definitely been there myself. Hang in there, moham - tomorrow's another day. This piece is tight.
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DIng Dong.......
    my o my ..who,s that late at night......?.
    Open tha door its me aight....!!!!
    yeah i just thought...
    let me pass by...
    acctually i am here to send you some good vibes...
    I just wrote a nice poem on this internet site....
    it was from this new nice poet moham....
    and she just describe a motion excactly how i feel inside...
    i wish i could go over to her and give her a Huge :love: Yeah that big......



    Mmm maybe i just did :wink:
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOOOOOOOOOOLl i mean I just Readed LOLOLO
     
  8. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey L
    thank you for showing me much love
    you know I like your hugs (LOL)
    and I love you very much!!! don't ever forget that!!

    Hey Gempis
    thank you for your concern, but don't worry about me, I'm aiight. And by the way thank you so much for your reply. I still have alot of questions (Taurus vs. Capricorn), but I ma leave like this for now.

    Rich, mzblkangl and E thanks for the read and the feel!!

    straight from the :heart:
    moham
     
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