Black Poetry : BACKWORDS

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... su rof erutuf a ereht sI

    Just when things seemed
    to be progressing
    regression slipped
    something - drawkwa -
    in between us
    and it made me
    stop and think...
    didn't have to read
    between the lines
    just needed to
    absorb what was
    going on ~
    inhale and blink my eyes
    maybe even click
    my heels three times
    for good measure ~
    ...then I stood still...
    and took notice
    of what had happend

    While I was moving forwards
    you had went words back,
    - sdrowkcaB -

    A world away...
    so I threw out my
    life line for you
    to hold onto
    and I hope you catch
    and return the line
    of feelings
    that I so willingly give
    I want you by my side
    not somewhere else;
    and not behind me
    or way back there
    hope you have a tight
    grasp so I can pull
    you forward because...
    - uoy evol I


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peed!!!! no yvaeh!!! no cissalc!!! just nmad doog!!!

    one love,blak
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you're....

    scratchin' my itch --Blakman!!
    And it feelz good....!!
    Thanks for the :heart:
     
  4. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he's lucky !

    this was sincere -
    I can tell.

    Maybe if you get a chance,
    you can check out my poem
    " Backwords " it's the first one I posted here.

    why do relationships seem to
    quickly speed to nowhere sometimes .
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are so observant...

    Hypnotize, thank you...
    and I would also include
    that -- I am lucky as well...
    For he is the poetry that
    resides deep within me, and
    because of that I could
    write songs of love
    everyday!!

    Thank your for noticing!!

    Much :heart:
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so tyght, gurl.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I LOVE HOW U PEN IT ALL TOGETHER
    FOR A GREAT FLOW OF WISDON
    I FEEL THIS ONE OUT DA HEART
    2 THE SOUL OF ONE MIND..
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister~

    Aye mami --

    Gracias for the read!
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Sherykah~

    And you know a sista like myself is tryin' to hold on...!
    Thank you for pointin' it out ~ Much :heart:
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    That's where I'm always tryin' to come from!
    St8 from "The SOULOFASISTA"!!
     
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