Black Poetry : Backdoor Cutter

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Apr 18, 2012.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk about being challenged

    Shorty had me off balance

    tossed a backdoor cutter

    that said brother,

    knuckle under

    I'm like...

    what next

    Lover,

    a wild pitch ~

    fraught with danger

    hit by two strangers

    aiming for the fences

    I take one for the team

    my manhood going deep



    Darryl Abdu Omari
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ head not the tail
     
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    Yes, head not the tail.

    Dear Poet Brother 1poetsought,

    I really like this piece. I read it two ways. And I must tell you the second has me seriously chuckling.

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this joint had me looking sideways ......lol you know where my mind was
    awesome scribe 1poet
     
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    "I want to be centerfield"

    Thanks for letting me play
     
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