Black Poetry : Back to the wall.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by I-khan, Feb 21, 2006.

  1. I-khan

    I-khan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Staring into faces
    that dont care for my cases
    I tried to work hard
    but it didnt fit my paces.

    They said I was wrong,
    wrong evil and sad
    I tried hard not to be that bad
    but its hard with all the adversity
    I had.
    I could not give up so I got mad.

    Then I got paid the wrong way
    they said it wasnt right
    so they cornered me and said:
    " You better put up a fight"
    I tried to make flight
    but they wanted to lynch me that night.

    I said I had not choice
    they said that I wasnt right
    I tried to escape
    so I shot the sheriff once
    and the deputy twice.

    I'm as good as dead
    a mouse in a maze
    I made some wrong turns
    but did not build this craze
    that became a trail
    I was forced to blaze
    and no matter what turn
    it would be my end days.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as it end only to a new start of the next day
    what a world wind ............tyte scribe.........
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was deep...and sadly, a cold reality in so many ways
    tight piece poet...I like your creativity
     
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    wow i-khan anotha side of ya. i like it keep doing what cha do playboy!!!!!!!!!!!:love:
     
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    That was fire I khan
    You spit many truths in your flow
    Much Love on that piece
     
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