Quiet Poetry Lounge : back Porch brotha

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Mar 27, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    u sacrificed my love
    for the B down the street
    she got crooked braid in her hair
    and ash on her feet
    her perfume is of dead flowers
    old, shelfed, and cheap
    but she give good head
    so instead u choose her
    over me.
    she don't cook cornbread
    and only know hip hop
    mainstream jazz offers too much
    class, and her breast to big
    for her top.
    u rub ur feet together on
    her tattered couch
    she speaks from ghetto
    storefronts never watch her mouf.
    u say u want one thing
    but i see u with another
    back porch brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know it's funny how one
    like da nasty kind ova
    da bread winner
    but let his azzzzz know da deal
    and what's really real
     
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    :laugh: I know some back porch brothas who should read this, they just don't know.


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    woo gyrl!!!! i hear you!!! but in my experiences i've learned that if that fool makes you wonder why he chose her over you when it's obvious that your are "the bread winner" ($RICH$), then he don't deserve you no way!!!!! just keep living, loving and scribin. one day you'll be saying "Goodbye, Back Porch Brotha, and Hello BALCONY MAN :D !!!!!! lol

    Kim
     
  5. MORE

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    i've learned to laff
    and let it go
    take my life
    on the evenflo
    back porch brothas
    like junkyard dogs
    some ol story
    same ol song.lol thanks yall
     
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    :toast: :toast: GREAT WORK IT SOUNDS LIKE MY EX.
     
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    MORE, Encore!

    1poetsought ~
     
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