Black Haiku : back pain by BLUE

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  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I met this brother
    on the train and bought his book
    he is self published

    learned a lot of things
    printing on line and selling
    bought his poetry...

    i share a haiku
    with his permission i do
    told him bout destee


    too

    backpain by blue:

    SENIOR CITIZENS
    WEARING SHOES WITH VELCRO STRAPS...

    RHEUMATISM HURTS!
     
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    Your experience made me smile deepy, thanks for sharing it, love the haiku.

    One thing hurts worse than
    back pain, and that is a tooth
    with an exposed nerve
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    painfully indepth
    flicked junction ware to cause
    black tears of year age
     
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    a tooth with an exposed nerve
    the thought makes me cringe
    tis beyond the back.....!


    oooooh watz....
     
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    slump ova again
    posed sad structure back hurting
    like a twisted knot
     
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