Black Poetry : Back Me Up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aaliyahmonet, Aug 14, 2002.

  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What happened to our friendship,
    We suppose to be buddies,
    Did i do somethin wrong to u,
    Tell me what did i do,
    Is it just anotha sad song,
    Back me up for a change,
    I ain't makin no more mistakes,
    Is this what i get in return,
    I don't deserve to get hurt,
    12 years we were the best of friends,
    Now its comin to an end,
    U do what u have to do,
    I'm through.

    Aaliyahmonet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sistah some time da friend of old
    is a story told bold at the end
    true friendz will never dem
    to the hem of a sad myth...........really didn't know u !
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Friends are there for you
    Through it all
    For it all to go away in one day
    What took 12 years
    Man.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin dis one back !
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i never meant to hurt you
    in fact my thoughts were you
    i just couldnt explain,
    my actions thorough to you
    i couldnt find my mind,
    or renegotiate with complacency
    i was overbooked,
    no emotional vacancy
    i was money makin,
    out at night all in my hustle
    while you cried inside,
    the guilt has my tummy achin
    girl,i just wanna tell you you're something flagrant
    i wish i was patient,but i wasnt now im at lost
    the cost of love is priceless my heart is tossed
    i miss you like jesus to the cross
    im heartbroken ,
    anotha love lost


    this poem had me goin Aaliyahmonet

    i miss you girl

    i wrote u a lil poem a few months back..hope everything is well

    [email protected]
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you hurt the one closest to you, when they are supposed to be the ones you protect. Feeling this flow.
     
  7. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling this piece...I can relate to this realness...

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea it will hurt me if i was down with someone for so long and then something comes alone and they diss you. maybe that person wasnt your friend after all. love the flow flow on poet.
     
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    Just straight feeling it! Hope everything works out and it's just a phase... tyte flow thanks for sharing.
    D.S.