Quiet Poetry Lounge : Back in the Creator's hand

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by asimplepoet, Aug 3, 2006.

  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Or dear Master can you hear me now
    From where I lay way deep down low
    I done made a mess of your creation
    Just using it for my idle recreation
    I know that was not its intended use
    Yet it is holding up through the abuse
    Lord, the creation that I speak of is me
    I've not been what you created me to be
    So father please take and remodel this clay
    Lord I am giving myself back to you today
    I am giving back to you absolute control
    I am completely yours to shape and mold
    I know you'll have to put me back in the fire
    But to be a useable vessel is my true desire
    So put me back on the potter's wheel again
    And begin the process anew free from sin
    I promise to be what you intended me to be
    For I know that your greatest creation is me
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :darts: Beautiful cry for help, and you are asking the right one. Keep your head upbecause there will be trials as you try to find your true self and who you were ment to be. Stay strong.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely u not unheard as he so hear thy cry and will remold .....tyte drop
     
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    This was really beautiful.

    Much Luv
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, Sister ASP! This is a beautiful re-dedication! The sincere humility in this is so palpable!

    My heart was touched. My soul was eased.

    I loved this! But my favorite lines are in bold....Oh, how I felt those especially! Thank you for sharing this!
     
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    had to bring this one back for the realism of it !
     
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    Chevron Dove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! Awesome!

    Thanks for bumping again. I missed this one.
     
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