Black Poetry : Back from nowhere

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Nov 3, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Staring into my reflection
    such a seriously loving expression
    found at the bottom of a puddle
    sarcasm and cynicism in constant cuddle
    i wonder how all of this could occur
    when i had just come to prefer
    being my only partner in crime
    how can he come back now after all this time
    stirring up my sedimentary life
    with talk of marriage and me being a wife
    Telling me things I want to hear
    about how he loves me and wants me near
    I'm so scared that this is real and terrified its not
    because for years i've been doing what everyone else wants
    never making decisions when it comes to the heart
    letting others take over from the very start
    I am going to the other polar on this
    i am going to see if love exists
    i am going to grasp onto him
    while not losing myself
    while encouraging physical and spiritual growth.
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm stuck on words,
    don't know what to say.
    so deep--so very deep,
    i'll dig me a grave.
    you take that leap of faith,
    but hold on to that string.
    bcuz although love is beautiful,
    it's also very mean.
    and i hope your ready for things like that,
    bcuz they will surely come.
    i wanted to tell you upfront,
    in case nobody else did--i just wanted to be the one......(yo flow should be published)
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the encouragement. been on the mean end of the receiving line, waiting for the other side.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl i dont know what to say but i sure understand that feelin..
    cross yo fingers and go with the flow...
    not to fall to deep...just flow see where it takes you...
    i dont know...this is all deep coz i know this....
    if i didnt know better i think i wrote it....lol
    just an Angels view...much love girl
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sarcasm and cynicism in constant cuddle

    whoa, what a line, and what growth. Randee, this is profound and represents some major head progression. I am so proud and happy for you, girl.
     
  6. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    crazy when everything just comes together for us isn't it. Thank you guys from the bottom of my heart, you guys have been there for me through all of the bad writing, relationships and just general bs
     
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    wow...you never cease to jerk a readers emotions...
    I've been here before...so I'm completely feeling
    this flow....makes me wish relationships weren't so
    complicated...ya know...
     
  8. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicage - crazy rihgt the things we go through and perceive we go through. writing always helps, puts things in perspective.
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know what u mean...love this
     
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