Black Poetry : babygirl open your eyes and see

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby girl open your eyes and see that you are a thoroughbred
    100% black female with a smart head
    f*%k that game that n**9a spittin to you, he don't mean a [email protected] thing he said
    it's just ******** that every other girl he talks to has been fed
    You too young to fall a victim to his games
    Don't try to fall in love too fast, cause in the end it just ends in pain
    You got freedom girl, shop a little, do yo thing
    Wait a little before you try to accept a ring
    Open your eyes baby girl, you'll truly shine light to alot of things

    Follow your intuition if you think he cheating then he probably is
    Don't blame yourself, a man will only be a man first
    Life ain't like what you read in novels and books, nothing is as real as this
    Have confidence mami, don't second guess
    Walk with your head up, feet str8, and a twist that says 'ooo, look at this'
    In the end mami he'll remember all the things about you and miss
    But walk on, don't backtrack, it'll leave this ***** pissed
    Cause he'll remember them nights when you was his

    Open your eyes baby girl and see he don't want your baby
    and them ******** lies he was feeding you before you got pregnant, were just that...only lies
    Cause when all was said and done
    And you was on that emergency table alone
    He was hard to catch like flies
    And walked out on your without any goodbyes
    But you a victim now you might as well open your eyes
    And realize
    The other baby girl you holding in your arm is a blessing sugar pie
    Open ya eyes


    Open ya eyes and see that he ain't doing nothing but using you
    No house, no job, he ain't even driving boo
    That ***** catching trains to come see you
    MARTA, you a peach in GA
    Don't let that ***** do that to you
    And all the time you been with him shouldn't be an excuse for you to stay with him, he ain't changing for you
    If he was he would been did it for you
    Open ya eyes boo

    Love is blind but it shouldn't too blind for you too see
    That you suddenly ain't got no money
    And he should be besides you in the bed but you lonely
    horny
    and plain tired honey
    You got to understand me
    I'm only looking from the outside baby girl but you gotta understand me
    You don't deserve the **** he put you through, like Kanye 'drive slowly'
    and you'll see baby girl....there is a lot to see
    baby girl open ya eyes and see....
    open ya eyes and see......
    open.....
    ya......
    eyes.....
    and.....
    see!!!!!
     
  2. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Krazy I love how you keep it raw and real. It definitely was a tight flo cuz.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now i would love you to do this in spoken form. hey do you ever checked out the poetry spots in the atl let me know sis. flo on poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out lyricks ya raw and deep on dis one
    i love the flow sis do ya thang gurl !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice write,very nice especially the rawness,
    I write raw myself but it's not permitted here for me.:thinking:
    Great work girl!:terrific:
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam for feeling this flow. It went out to any and every girl who feels doubt in herself over a man. This here is to let them know, keep ya head up and eyes out the clouds.
     
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    If your words allow only one girl to open her eyes and see the hard truth, then they are worth their weight in gold. Loved reading you again.
     
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