Black Poetry : BABYDADDY'SDRAMA

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Leaky103, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEN YOUR DAUGHTER ENTERED THE WORLD,
    I RECALL HOW PROUD YOU WERE OF YOUR BABY GIRL.
    HOWEVER, SINCE YOU HAVE MET SOME NEW SWIRL,
    SHE IS NO LONGER A PART OF YOUR WORLD.
    NO, THIS IS NOT ABOUT THE MONIES
    BUT ABOUT PRIORITIZING YOUR RESPONSIBILITIES.
    WHEN YOU CONCEIVED YOUR CHILD IT WAS THRU LOVE
    BUT NOW YOU WISHED YOU WORE A GLOVE
    BECAUSE I AM ASKING FOR ENDS TO SUPPORT YOUR CHILD
    AS YOU LIE, PARTY AND GET BUCKWILD.
    SEE, I DON'T NEED TO SAY NEGATIVE THINGS ABOUT YOU, FATHER
    BECAUSE IT'S OBVIOUS YOU ARE NOT MAKING IT ANY HARDER
    AS SHE GROWS OLDER AND NOTICES LACK OF PARTICIPATION IN HER LIFE
    MAY THE LOOK ON HER FACE CUT YOUR HEART LIKE A KNIFE.
    AND BEFORE YOU GO AROUND CALLING MY A *****,
    REMEMBER IT IS I WHO WILL KEEP HER FROM RUNNING INTO A DITCH.
    THERE IS NO REASON YOU SHOULD NOT BE IN YOUR CHILD'S LIFE,
    SO LET'S FORGET ALL THE NONSENSE AND STRIFE
    AND REMEMBER THE ADAGE "THINK BEFORE YOU DO"
    BECAUSE AT THE END OF THE DAY, YOUR CHILD WANTS TO SAY "I LOVE YOU"
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are so strong on your point
    in the flow..
    feeling the message here
    Nice very nice
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  3. Khasm13

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    tru indeed...
    gotta support your seeds...
    i hear you on this one
    loud and clear...
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed very
    strong message
    likes the flow
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt this piece speaks out clearly
    keep flowing
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mm Mmm Mmmm! (as I shake my head)

    This is a [email protected] shame.

    I hate hearing about a father not doing what should be done 4 their seed,
    cuz they didn't ask 2 be conceived.
    Many dudes say that the mom's wants loot cuz of her greed
    But if she has the child 24/7, that's like gettin' paid 4 the week
    cuz that's work.

    I feel U on this, deeply.
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feld this .....







    Love L
     
  8. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Somebody betta start passing around the offering plate, cuz you just brought one helluva sermon! Dag...I'm going through this now. After six years, I'm finally asking for support and he has the nerve to be trippin'. Gone 'head and preach, sistah!

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    keep your head up sista. loved the message.
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The message here is clear, this was heartfelt and so on point.